The thought of you,makes me smile.I fell in love with a thought.The thought of "us".The thought I wished had come true,the thought of us being more than "friends",being in a relationship.The thought of you seeing me as someone more than a friend,a boyfriend.The thought of talking everyday,going on adventures,wait just let me stop.They are all just thoughts..
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Author:
M.m (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A lot,confused times.I want honest feedback,I want to pursue in writing. ;) -m.m
- Category: Love
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Yep. Nicely expressed.
thoughts can be good or bad
This is gorgeous. You totally encapsulate the feeling and i know it only too well. You cannot help but have thoughts when the presence of somone awakens you, you realise theres that special attraction. If this is hapening to you right now then take my advice "Tell her about it" (song by Bllly Joel also) don't sit on it.
Welcome to MPS, M.m. You are off to a good start with this poem!
I would say, the best way to advance in your writing ability would be to study and observe the submittals on this site, as well as the comments about them. I look forward to your development in future submittals.
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