A fabrication of half-truths stored in the minds of the youth,
a chain of lies told over time ,
it created two eyes that could see and another that went blind,
going back in time is no use, no room for a rewind,
lets melt away the trauma in our shadow and dissect our demons,
swim in the melted stream of our shadows all combined,
maybe it'll give us a chance to see exactly how our society was designed,
Inclined to know the how and the why, the science and the religion combined
in a state of mind now that I can't define
part alienated and part connected to all of mankind
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This poem aims for truth; the Great story of Creation; Genesis. Nice visual imagery conjured up in your writing.
That it does, thank you 🙂
A very deep and philosophical poem, laralove! Tremendous insights portrayed and revealed. Congratulations on this amazing piece!
- thank you! 🙂
good for the people on CSI
huh? CSI?
it was a tv show. crime scene investigaters
Ahhhh I getcha :')
Ahhhh I getcha :')
I replied yesterday but I don't think it reached you
I wanted to say.i don't know what I was thinking about at the time sorry . onepauly
nooo, no apologies needed 🙂 I get what you mean :')
I don't know what I was thinking. sorry
that was for laralove
no big deal. we all make mistakes. I do. if not how am I going to learn.
catch 22. I hope I don't start drinking again. its a tough deal but I think I can manage, if I did start up again I'm fucking screwed, because a lot of times I used to get drunk. that was my only reason for drinking to get drunk. and do crazy things.
that was for lara love
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