amber

loving an aquarius

i once fell into glistening waters

in hopes that i finally would not be alone

drowning had never been so beautiful 

while being pulled down, i felt so free

the water bearer showed me the depths of the ocean

he stole the light that rested at the surface of the sea

once he left i was stuck at the bottom

i could not find my way back to breathe 

Comments4

  • kevin browne

    you need to train your lungs up and take in as much air as you can and write all about it. you are doing a fine job with your expression here. stick with it amber because the light at the end of the tunnel maybe you. welcome to the poetry factory.

  • LIGHT WARRIOR

    Unfortunately, AQUARIANS (especially the MEN) are hard pills to swallow for many....Love and emotion is not easy for them to deal with until late in life...theyre all about EVERYONE else, then themselves, then you come in to fit in to the rest of their agenda...Unless you are also an AQUARIAN, its not gonna be easy...I happen to know SEVERAL couples who are both AQUARIANS and they are actually PERFECT for each other...but I am very well learned in Astrology and over many years I cant remember ever seeing An Aquarius who was involved with another sign that worked...I'm sure theyre out there but they are scarce...anyway...Keep writing...FUCK HIM....NEXT>..lol...Best wishes

  • LIGHT WARRIOR

    Unfortunately, AQUARIANS (especially the MEN) are hard pills to swallow for many....Love and emotion is not easy for them to deal with until late in life...theyre all about EVERYONE else, then themselves, then you come in to fit in to the rest of their agenda...Unless you are also an AQUARIAN, its not gonna be easy...I happen to know SEVERAL couples who are both AQUARIANS and they are actually PERFECT for each other...but I am very well learned in Astrology and over many years I cant remember ever seeing An Aquarius who was involved with another sign that worked...I'm sure theyre out there but they are scarce...anyway...Keep writing...FUCK HIM....NEXT>..lol...Best wishes

  • LIGHT WARRIOR

    Unfortunately, AQUARIANS (especially the MEN) are hard pills to swallow for many....Love and emotion is not easy for them to deal with until late in life...theyre all about EVERYONE else, then themselves, then you come in to fit in to the rest of their agenda...Unless you are also an AQUARIAN, its not gonna be easy...I happen to know SEVERAL couples who are both AQUARIANS and they are actually PERFECT for each other...but I am very well learned in Astrology and over many years I cant remember ever seeing An Aquarius who was involved with another sign that worked...I'm sure theyre out there but they are scarce...anyway...Keep writing...FUCK HIM....NEXT>..lol...Best wishes



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