i once fell into glistening waters
in hopes that i finally would not be alone
drowning had never been so beautiful
while being pulled down, i felt so free
the water bearer showed me the depths of the ocean
he stole the light that rested at the surface of the sea
once he left i was stuck at the bottom
i could not find my way back to breathe
- Author: amber ( Offline)
- Published: July 19th, 2017 23:08
- Category: Love
- Views: 23
Comments4
you need to train your lungs up and take in as much air as you can and write all about it. you are doing a fine job with your expression here. stick with it amber because the light at the end of the tunnel maybe you. welcome to the poetry factory.
Unfortunately, AQUARIANS (especially the MEN) are hard pills to swallow for many....Love and emotion is not easy for them to deal with until late in life...theyre all about EVERYONE else, then themselves, then you come in to fit in to the rest of their agenda...Unless you are also an AQUARIAN, its not gonna be easy...I happen to know SEVERAL couples who are both AQUARIANS and they are actually PERFECT for each other...but I am very well learned in Astrology and over many years I cant remember ever seeing An Aquarius who was involved with another sign that worked...I'm sure theyre out there but they are scarce...anyway...Keep writing...FUCK HIM....NEXT>..lol...Best wishes
Unfortunately, AQUARIANS (especially the MEN) are hard pills to swallow for many....Love and emotion is not easy for them to deal with until late in life...theyre all about EVERYONE else, then themselves, then you come in to fit in to the rest of their agenda...Unless you are also an AQUARIAN, its not gonna be easy...I happen to know SEVERAL couples who are both AQUARIANS and they are actually PERFECT for each other...but I am very well learned in Astrology and over many years I cant remember ever seeing An Aquarius who was involved with another sign that worked...I'm sure theyre out there but they are scarce...anyway...Keep writing...FUCK HIM....NEXT>..lol...Best wishes
Unfortunately, AQUARIANS (especially the MEN) are hard pills to swallow for many....Love and emotion is not easy for them to deal with until late in life...theyre all about EVERYONE else, then themselves, then you come in to fit in to the rest of their agenda...Unless you are also an AQUARIAN, its not gonna be easy...I happen to know SEVERAL couples who are both AQUARIANS and they are actually PERFECT for each other...but I am very well learned in Astrology and over many years I cant remember ever seeing An Aquarius who was involved with another sign that worked...I'm sure theyre out there but they are scarce...anyway...Keep writing...FUCK HIM....NEXT>..lol...Best wishes
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