Feeling alone and trapped,
In my abyss called my mind,
Its empty yet filled,
With liquid called thoughts,
Overfilling and never ceases,
It's overwhelmed with choices,
I yet need to think about.
My heart feels cold,
Trying to love with nothing to love,
Missing pieces that are forever lost,
Not knowing what tomorrow brings,
Wanting to feel whole again,
But beats lonely to want to stop,
Feeling not worth the love.
I feel like the person I love,
Doesn't want me,
Doesn't need me,
Only to play with my heart,
To say things that carry no meaning,
I can't do it anymore,
Im feeling numb.
Broken,
Lost,
Alone.
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Author:
Domi (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Criticism welcomed.
- Category: Love
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Domi, there is so much emotion in your well written poem.
This might be kind of harsh, but sometimes it is the only solution:
If you realize you are barking up the wrong tree, go look for another tree. 🙂
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