Poetic Dan

Every word I see or hear

I like to say this every now and then, first of all I'll have to give you a bit of prospective.
This I think comes from being young and having the reasons just to give up, but instead of that, once a few attempts were made I thought I may as well make the most of this ride, before I see what's on the other side, if anything at all.

Now I have so many things to be grateful and to live for, but that little part of me that died will always be gone. I'm finally accepting that fact, no longer feeling sad.

So this is why I hold nothing back, living every day and moment to the best of my abilities as you just never know when it will end.

For everyone I meet, every word I see or hear, if it resonated with me, know that I'll try my best to live it, be it and breath it. My thankfulness goes to all that are sticking with it, helping me be the "who" that I want to be and that is forever changing due to the people in it.

I am lucky to see what I have, feel the pure hatred and disgust for everything on this planet, as I've now seen and felt the best it has to offer. So much love and compassion among many more than I knew before, now knowing all this balance is in my view; just need to keep patient and practice to stay on this new path.

Thanks to all that are joining me in my journey!

Comments4

  • 00000

    Really good read enjoyed that

    • Poetic Dan

      Much appreciated

    • Augustus

      Great message.

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you so kindly

      • kevin browne

        you take it in and let it out like a volcanic eruption with your words on fire my friend.a great percentage of the population are far too ignorant to understand what you have written here. it holds the truth and you write it well. having faith in your fellow man is truly a beautiful thing, just like you.

        • Poetic Dan

          That's one great way to make someone feel good about being my them self.
          Glad this was all understood!

        • FredPeyer

          Dan, wonderful writing, straight from the heart or even the gut. It is uncanny how your poem here and my "just around the corner" say kind of the same thing in different words.
          And you are so right that it is the people around you who care who will help you up that mountain called life.

          • Poetic Dan

            This lesson was thrown on to me my friend.
            And I'm actually now really grateful for it!
            Thank you for reading and glad you agreed on our outlooks being the same from different angles. We're not all so different in the end but I feel most know that here or come to find where this game call life can make a bit of sense. That's for me anyway



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