now now with no distain
who am i to refrain
eternal judgments
for more or for less
its just to be me
i guess i guess
for with and
more understanding
good be truths
and expanding
greater awareness
will come around
mutualy creativly
virtualy sound
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Author:
onepauly (
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Comments3
Nicely worded. We never stop learning. It's truely crazyy!!
thank you renzi.
Nice piece, Pauly. I loved the rhyming and the sentiments beind it. Learning never ceases. I love how you included creativity into the process of learning. Thanks for sharing.
thank you for this wonderful comment.
Like the concept, the rhyming, the conclusion. It made me think. Great work Pauly.
thank you fred. onepauly
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