AmandaJade

Faded Stars

Even when

 

her brightest stars seemed to die

 

the moon still continued to shine

 

in the deepest of the black midnight sky

 

Comments7

  • L.S.L

    Simple and beautiful

    • AmandaJade

      thank you <33

      • L.S.L

        Np :3

      • FredPeyer

        Beautiful Amanda, the way I understand your poem is that people, things come into our lives, pleople, things, leave our lives, but there is always a constant, somebody or something that will stay and help us through the darkest nights.

      • AAA

        the simple things tend to have a bigger impact on the mind and thoughts

      • kevin browne

        Nicely done poet x

      • Frank Prem

        and always will, no doubt. Nicely done Amanda.

      • burning-embers

        Lovely. I'm a sucker for short punchy wise jems like this.
        Goes into my fav's

      • Michael Edwards

        Superb little 'un.



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