A flower opened it's pedals and bloomed in the break of dawn.
A girl blossomed when she was kissed for the first time.
A baby cried,a mother heard her first lie.
A car rushed by and someone will die.
Take time to experience your life everyday cause we blossom and in time
fade away.
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Author:
Michele Ann Kalish (Pseudonym) (
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Comments5
Cease the day ❤ great write x
Thanks so much Renzi for for comment.
I appreciate it
Micalina
Beautifully written. I enjoyed the last line tremendously. And the line about the baby crying and the mother hearing her first lie was very clever. Great work, as always. Thanks for sharing.
Dear Charles
Thanks so much that was very kind of you
Cheers
Micalina
Embrace the experiences that we came for ... what else is life about? Your fine poem expresses this well, Micalina. Thanks for sharing!
Dear Louis
Thanks so much for your comment. I appreciate it very much
Cheers
Micalina
I've enjoyed your poem a wonderful piece. peace and love ww
Thanks so much so nice of you to say
Cheers
Micalina
This is quite creative and beautiful, I much enjoyed it!
It's a truth we must all face daily.
Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments.
Cheers
Micalina
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