Micalina

"Fade Away"



A flower opened it's pedals and bloomed in the break of dawn.

A girl blossomed when she was kissed for the first time.

A baby cried,a mother heard her first lie.

A car rushed by and someone will die.

Take time to experience your life everyday cause we blossom and in time

              fade away.

Comments6

  • Renzi

    Cease the day ❤ great write x

    • Micalina

      Thanks so much Renzi for for comment.
      I appreciate it
      Micalina

    • charlesbarrett

      Beautifully written. I enjoyed the last line tremendously. And the line about the baby crying and the mother hearing her first lie was very clever. Great work, as always. Thanks for sharing.

      • Micalina

        Dear Charles
        Thanks so much that was very kind of you
        Cheers
        Micalina

      • Louis Gibbs

        Embrace the experiences that we came for ... what else is life about? Your fine poem expresses this well, Micalina. Thanks for sharing!

        • Micalina

          Dear Louis
          Thanks so much for your comment. I appreciate it very much
          Cheers
          Micalina

        • Candlewitch

          so very true!

          *hugs, Cat

          • Micalina

            Thanks so much Cat
            Hugs
            Micalina

          • willyweed

            I've enjoyed your poem a wonderful piece. peace and love ww

            • Micalina

              Thanks so much so nice of you to say
              Cheers
              Micalina

            • Azura Nightsong

              This is quite creative and beautiful, I much enjoyed it!
              It's a truth we must all face daily.

              • Micalina

                Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments.
                Cheers
                Micalina



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