Tied between a love and a lie,
With an abandoned feeling inside,
I try to find sight;
What existential agony festered
And left a tangled mess for
Me to ignore and rest more?
I know this path is for the worst
Because I choose to be immersed
In Karma's beautiful curse.
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Author:
iRonnie (
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- Comment from author about the poem: If nothing goes around, Karma says nothing comes around
- Category: Spiritual
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A fine write Ronnie. But I dunno - who is this Karma chappie (or chap-ess)?! He, or she, is responsible for a lot of stuff, it seems. lol.
Well I was just considering it from the what goes around comes around. And if you do nothing then nothing comes back to you...and that my being caught between a love an a lie is causing me to want to just do nothing
And thank you!
It's me being a bit daft Ronnie! I don't hold to Karma stuff myself. Not to put-down your poem at all. But to me Karma is bunkum! heehee. I suppose what goes around does come around, as they say, but I don't think karma is the cause myself.
I think of karma as you reap what you sow. So the moral I was going for is that you can only achieve what you go for. Thats what I believe karma and LOA actually are.
Thank you much!!!
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