Lucky

Promise

Starting in the present with plans and dreams,

Talk of what we want our love to be and what's to come, 

A promise of a new day that has yet begun ,

Making room in our lives for 2 becoming 1, 

A fresh start removing the pain of relationship pasts,

A newfound commitment to making this new love last,

So we make a vow to move forward together,

And promise that our love will last forever,

Comments3

  • Nathan Fairchild

    Very relatable. I feel as though everyone should strive for such loyalty, such commitment. The problem is most people take problems they had from a previous relationship into the new one. This poem is nicely written and looks at things from a more positive, optimistic stand point. Which is the best way to start a new relationship. My favorite line is "Making room in our lives for 2 becoming 1".

    • Lucky

      Looking at things from this perspective in relationship terms is very new to me but being open and honest is making it a litt6easier. Thxs! We're striving for that goal☺

    • Agent of Chaos

      If only half the people who make that vow could keep it....

    • burning-embers

      Lovely simple way of wanting life to be. But life's no fairy tale its hard work and often poor rewards. However it is still lovely to see such thoughts expressed here.

      • Lucky

        Trying to start off going into something new on a positive note for once. It is hard work daily but for the right person it's worth it.



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