The unusual aroma connects us both, the taste of your skin, the softness of your caress. We're both entranced in each others glance, the brown glowing brightly in your eyes. So much passion in our embrace, enjoying each other's warmth. Uncontrolled burst of colors, stars burning in every hue. Dreaming of another encounter, the slumber of a fool in love....
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I would correct "incounter" to "encounter". And add a space after the following apostrophe. Other than that, very descriptive. Definitely incites strong feelings of love and desire. Nicely written.
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