Soul Dancing


Soul Dancing

there are lingering

pages of you.

I remember softly...


loving your eyes

looking through the vortex

and back again.


that part of you

touching me...


at that moment

in our time,

what could never be

whole again,

without you.

lost in your gaze...


to look away.

climbing after,

mesmeric player

pipes the tune,

spellbound soul

I follow,


keeping pace

with the woven magic.

Rock teeth below

cannot touch me,

I am flighted

"I believe"...


  • Louis Gibbs

    Oh, this is simply beautiful, Cat! What a marvelous expression of deep felt love. Thank you for this one.

    • Candlewitch

      dear Louis,

      thank you for reading and responding in such a positive way 🙂

      *hugs, Cat

    • orchidee

      Good write C.

      • Candlewitch

        thanks, O.

        *hugs, Cat

      • Michael Edwards

        Started to read and couldn't stop - it just flows.

        • Candlewitch

          dear Michael,

          thank you for your kindness 🙂

          *hugs, Cat

        • FredPeyer

          Well Cat, and I "believe" in you.... at least as far as writing is concerned! 🙂
          Beautiful poem.

          • Candlewitch

            aw Fred, thanks 🙂

            *hugs, Cat

          • Fay Slimm.

            Full of your warm tender heart these words flow down the page with love at their core. A lovely read Cat.

            • Candlewitch

              thank you, sweet lady Fay!

              *hugs, Cat

            • Christina8

              Absolutely beautiful descriptions! It's truly a wonderful write! --Christina

              • Candlewitch

                thank you Christina!

                *hugs, Cat

              • Azura Nightsong

                This is so beautiful! The formatting gave it an extra sparkle too!

                • Candlewitch

                  thank you, Azura, I'm pleased you liked it 🙂

                  *hugs, Cat

                • Goldfinch60

                  "I believe" that this is a good write.

                  • Candlewitch

                    thank you Goldfinch 🙂

                    *hugs, Cat

                  • Heather T

                    Gosh. Just...yeah. Spellbound in your words.

                    • Candlewitch

                      a visit from you is like a visit from my friend and mother, the moon 🙂 thank you!

                      *major hugs, Cat

                    • valene

                      Well my friend, you've penned another poem I can totally relate to! Methinks you know why I say that so i shan't go into details. it's a beautiful write, Cat!

                      • Candlewitch

                        dear val,

                        thank you for reading and commenting 🙂 and I do understand, perfectly!

                        *hugs, Cat

                        • valene

                          I knew you would! 🙂

                        • Night Owl

                          Love the rhythm of this- Took me back in time... Lovely!

                          • Candlewitch

                            thank you Night Owl,

                            it was so nice of you to look up an old poem of mine. I appreciate it very much 🙂

                            *hugs, Cat

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