Dull Blade

Brie

With everything in me I swung

Harder than I ever have

But I still lost

My blade was dull

Your blade was not 

It was sharp, and it was white hot

For I could not beat you

Because I was already beaten

But I could see right through you

I knew your weakness 

And you knew mine

But you use that against me

So that you didn't pay a fine

 

  • Author: Brie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 28th, 2017 15:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: *Forgery will not be allowed.* No copies of any kind. Please enjoy. :) ©2017
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 31
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  • FredPeyer

    Brie, like your poem. Maybe a knife sharpener might have helped, but then you could not have written such a good poem.



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