I have my family members in my heart,
for all of them are actually really smart.
I love my Mom, Dad, sister, and brother:
they are all just so brilliant as no other!
My Vietnamese household is really neat,
and is actually literally, to me, so sweet.
Tam, Mary, Tammy, and Tim are their names.
I have so many pictures with them in frames!
Since I’ll always respect all of them lots,
they'll surely be kept in my thoughts!
To me, they are going to be inspired,
because they are always required!
I’ll never forget anyone in my family.
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Author:
Vivian (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 28th, 2017 21:28
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is in AABB form (except for that essential last line), and as my other poems, has 100 words.
- Category: Family
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What a beautiful declaration of love for one's own family. My wife is Chinese and family is very important to us as well, so I understand where you are coming from.
Wow, we both have Asian families then. Thanks a lot~!
Yes, even though I am a hauole (Hawaiian for white man). But after 40 years of marriage and 30 years of living in Hawaii, I probably feel more Asian than White! 🙂
Woah, you're lots older than me! xD
No kidding! I am 69, but the nice thing about this site is that age doesn't matter, what matters is the writing and sharing of our poems and/or short stories. 🙂
Aw, you're so sweet. 🙂
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