Candlewitch

Deep (by:eddy styx)

Deep

in the damp heat
of the sultry night,
she heaves a sigh
as he plunges deep
inside her and scoops
out a subliminal thought
in his curled palm.
slowly, he unfurls
his fingers
and the light
of the setting sun intensifies
as this intimacy
is revealed...
deliberately,
he raises his hand
to his mouth
and greedily
to satisfy
his all-consuming hunger
gobbles this delicacy whole

 

   

 

Comments7

  • Its Raskolnikov

    Very descriptive, I love it.

    • Candlewitch

      thank you for telling me 🙂

      ever, eddy

    • Louis Gibbs

      A hot one indeed, eddy! Very graphically presented poem ... thanks for sharing, Cat.

      • Candlewitch

        dear Louis,

        I hope I didn't singe your eyelashes, LOL 😉

        ever, eddy
        *hugs, Cat

      • orchidee

        Oohh now he's come out of his cupboard, or basement, and is hungry. Ccoooeee Eddie, having a bad hair day?! heehee.

        • Candlewitch

          thank you O.

          ever, eddy

        • Godisreal

          I love how you write

          • Candlewitch

            thank you! that is nice to know 🙂

            ever, eddy

          • Michael Edwards

            Wow - some piece - love the enigma of this rather (well for me at least) mysterious write.

            • Candlewitch

              thank you Michael, I am pleased that you enjoyed this piece!!!

              ever, eddy

            • FredPeyer

              And that is how he stole her soul!
              Beautiful writing, was completely drawn into it.

              • Candlewitch

                dear Fred,

                you have great understanding and a discerning eye 😉 thank you so much!

                ever, eddy

              • valene

                eddy, this is definitely an 'I need a cold shower' poem! It's so powerfully written I can feel the intensity of this sexual encounter. you do come across as selfish bastard, who takes what he wants when he wants it! no offense intended.... 🙂

                • Candlewitch

                  hello valene,

                  no offense taken...as I am a selfish bastard 😉 and I take what I can get, lol. thanks for reading and commenting! nice to hear from you!

                  ever, eddy

                  • valene

                    i figured no offense would be taken....but nice to know i was right! LOL!



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