Your heart is a thorn or a dangerous pin prick
dangerous, sly, deadly and slick
your jaws are like bear traps ready to snap
but is there some good inside of that?
Although you are killer and snap like a twig
your cold stone heart your fur so thick
your emerald green eyes like a flashlight at night
alluring, abnormal yet attractive and bright
Your cry is like dropping a large glass pot
like a rusty old key in an broken lock
your paws are silent like a butterflies wing
but awfully feared like a medieval king.
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Author:
BananaMayonnaise (
Offline) - Published: July 29th, 2017 18:34
- Comment from author about the poem: This is my first poem and I was proud of it and I wanted to share it. I'm only 11 but for me I enjoyed it and hoped others could too.
- Category: Nature
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Comments3
For your first poem, you've done very well. Keep up the good work.
Thank you 🙂
Welcome to MPS, this is a good first poem, let's see what you can do next. The more you write, the better you get.
I can't believe this is your first poem, or that you are only 11 and have done such a fine job! Please continue to write. You must be so proud, and I'm proud of you, too.
Thank you. You have encouraged my to write more. I'd love to see some of your poetry 🙂
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