I see you, I know you

Brie

I see you

I see that you're okay

Can you see me?

Could you tell that I'm okay?

I know you

I know that you're happy

Do know me?

Could you know that I'm happy?

Whatever fate holds in store for us, it won't be as one

I know this

I know fate, and fate knows hate for me

So far all fate has ever known for you is fairness 

For me? Loss

I still see you

I see that you've moved on

Can you see me?

Could you tell that I've moved on?

I still know you

I know that you don't remember me

Do you still know me?

Could you ever know that I still remember you?

I see you, I know you

I've loved you all this time

Do you see me? Do you know me?

Have you loved me at all?

I still see you 

I still know you

I know that you're okay 

Please, love tell me you've thought of me today 

  • Author: Brie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 29th, 2017 20:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: *Forgery will not be allowed.* No copies of any kind. Please enjoy. :) ©2017
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 22
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Comments1

  • FredPeyer

    Brie, I do like the way you structured this poem with all the repetitions. And I do feel the emotions of love, hurt, regret, and maybe a little bit of hope.
    Well penned!

    • Brie

      Thank you, I've been working on this for a while! I'm certainly glad you enjoyed it. <3



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