There was a girl that shined so bright
She was so happy
She was the sun in our whole school
She could make anyone laugh
She would sing to the whole class what a gental voice she had
She would give everyone a hug
Make people feel loved
Help people when they are down
She made life go around and around
But one thing shocked me made me frozen
One day....
There was no longer any sun shine at our school
Because we lost her
We lost the person that showed us how wonderful life is
She moved far far away
To a place that means forever
She might have said live life smile feel proud
But clearly she did not feel the same
But I wonder why she did not feel the same
She took a life away seeing such pain
Things that never go away they stay in your brain
Knowing that such a beutiful person felt so scared and alone
Surprised me scared me
She took a life one day
Her life
There was girl who shined so bright
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- Author: Tia Davis/テイア ( Offline)
- Published: August 1st, 2017 10:02
- Comment from author about the poem: Its like showing what some people feel like when someone close is gone forever showing how and why not commit suicide everyone will miss you
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
So beautiful, so sad, so well put. I'm sorry if this was a personal experience. Suicide is painful for all those involved in any way.
Thank you
Tia, you wrote a beautiful poem with a strong message.
Thank you
This made me cry Tia, having been through a similar experience myself. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt words. Keep writing and expressing!
Thank you
Sad for everyone, even those who didn't know her. Written very well though.
Thank you btw this girl could be anybody or almost anybody it could of been me thank you for reading
Thank you for posting it. It's beautiful.
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