Stuck at the train station

carleymcnamara08

 

Stuck at the train station.

I was filled with so much confusion, because it was all just an illusion
A figure of my imagination
A train that was stuck at the same station
I boarded that train ready for a new destination
I waited patiently
Without hesitation
I'd paid for my ticket but the train still sat there
I was distracted by the trees and the way the rain drops fell
That I didn't hear the alarm bell
The train wasn't moving
This was so confusing
I've paid for my fare
This wasn't fair
But still the train sat there
I want a refund
This was suppose to be fun
I was forced to changed platforms
as I reluctantly pressed the train button door
I was unsure
But I headed for my next train door.

 

 

 

  • Author: carleymcnamara08 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 2nd, 2017 04:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem, after going through a pretty tough break up, and realising I was just stuck in the same place.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Louis Gibbs

    A well expressed metaphor on life, carley! May the next train get closer to you where you want to go. Welcome to MPS!



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