It's great when you find it
But it hurts.
Everyone knows the pain
You can't describe it
It can hurt
But yet it heals
It gets real
But sometimes it feels fake
The feeling doesn't feel returned
It always ends.
It's about when it does
How do you cope?
Do you have to cope?
Or can you let it out
You can't feel for two people.
It's a double edged sword
Everyone has been stabbed.
Everyone has killed....
It's just love
For better or worse
It's just love.
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Author:
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- Comment from author about the poem: I never claimed to be good at poetry I just need to reflect my thoughts and express my feelings
- Category: Love
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Comments4
Yes, but love is a gift, for however long it's with you. We all want it to last forever, and for some it does. Great write.
It can be a gift.... but you feel so lucky that your afraid to screw it up and you feel paranoid and sad about losing it. Thank you
love is something we all so desperately miss when it's not with you.
Amen
You're right.....the feeling of love can be both a blessing and a curse. But though love can hurt you in the end, it's nice to feel the happiness of love even if it's not for forever.
I feel you
We could say 'lucky in love' - though I don't believe in luck! A fine write. I'm "sure" it's a good poem. The only thing I'm not sure about is how to get the upside-down question mark?! lol.
Hold down the question mark on the keyboard lol thanks for the feedback
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