jonnyc1

The End

Desperate breaths leave her slow
Numbness and pain fill the soul
Vivid lights will soon turn black
A Pulse too weak to stop the attack
Silent pleas escape the eyes
No more ways to hear the lies
Her fingers grasp the hand that's near
The path that's next is way too clear
Shadows cast cover the hope
Despair seeps in, cannot cope
Failed tears spell her fate
With this ill a cure is too late

Comments5

  • JaneEVE

    Good poetry !

  • Sepala Weliwitigoda

    Nice write.

  • myself and me

    It is the moment far beyond sadness. How could we erase that. This moment shall lead you to all the precious moments you had shared. Very touching poem.

  • Hopey_xx

    So thought provoking- well done!

  • Louis Gibbs

    A worthy presentation of the end of a life, this poem. Well done, jonny! Very well done.



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