pinecone200234530

The Lonely

I sit alone and sing in my head

I wonder when I'll be dead

I look in jealousy and almost hate

Is this fate?

I long to belong

To feel like a pack

But I don't think anyone will ever have my back

Comments5

  • OUTBACK

    THE PACK* = COMMUNITY* = COMMUNISM* - ( SOCIETY )* ! NO NEED TO BELONG TO THAT - AT ALL ! BE YOU ! A UNIQUE* - ORIGINAL* - EXPLORATIONAL* - EXPRESSION* - OF THAT* WHICH IS ( LIFE ) : NOT THE SHADOW* WORLD*- THAT IS ( SOCIETY )* !

    • pinecone200234530

      But, is it better to belong and sin or to be an outcast and blameless?

      • OUTBACK

        (NEITHER)* ! BETTER ? BELONG* & SIN ? WHAT SIN* ? AN OUTCAST* ? ANYONE WHOM IS TRUE* TO ONESELF* IS ALWAYS PERCEIVED* OF AS AN OUTCAST FROM THE ( CLUB ) = (SOCIETY) ! SOCIETY* IS THE RESULTS* OF (THE DISEASE* OF DEPENDENCY)* - UPON THAT WHICH PROCLAIMS* ITSELF AN (AUTHORITY)* OVER & BEYOND ONESELF* - TO BE (OBEYED & COMPLIED) WITH !

      • myself and me

        There is always someone, the right one for you. Be patient, all the lonely waiting is worth it. Like this one.

        • pinecone200234530

          A poem about loneliness is not necessarily about absence of love or romantic fantasy.

        • Diamond

          It's fun to belong to oneself. Sing in your head and listen to your own song. Love your own voice. A nice write. Share more please.

        • sue.evans

          You can sense your loneliness from your words. Everyone has a right to belong - you will find your place. We should celebrate who we are and what we have to offer no matter how small we think that is!

        • OUTBACK

          DREAMING* ONES REALITY* = ( LIFE on IMPACT )* !



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