I noticed
my shadow slimmer
since my darkness
lightened
When I began to
treat myself
as if I were the earth,
I gave myself
the chance
To cleanse myself
of dirty water,
the cleaner
the water
the fewer
the leaches.
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Comments3
I sense an awakening of spirit here. Well expressed, Gina!
Beautifully written, Gina! I love the first stanza, the way you described the lifting of darkness. Made me think that we all should go through this cleansing every so often, not only clean the dirty water, but get rid of excess baggage as well.
Your write clearly outlines the need for allowing time and chance to be cleansed so light will flow better after shadows depart. Good short-line form for slowing the read. Well done Gina.
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