You were
Making me count
My lasts breaths
While you were
Polluting the air
With your dirty
W O R D S
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Author:
Observant (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this within a minute or two, I thought it'd be nice to share some random little scrap poems as well as the ones that i hold close to my heart (most of which are posted here). It may personally not be my favorite work, but I still love sharing my poetry with the community on My Poetic Side!
- Category: Love
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Comments3
Sometimes even the shortest poems can convey a world of meaning.
Nice poem!
Even though it was written fast and is short, doesn't mean it cannot be a great poem! And this one fits the bill.
Thought provoking work. Wotever is it about..... mind pictures, you created lots here.
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