Another day has gone
my mind keeps holding on
sour memories of what that has been
but all this pondering
will drive me insane
he will not come back again
but my heart continues to bleed
like a wounded dog
Whiles the scars deepen in my heart
I struggle to live
I'll give you this misery, I breathe
I rather take all your pains
no, another day will come
And I still feel the same
AS the day you left me
but I will always have a piece of you
That I have to take care of and that is our son
but that does not mean that my pain went away
because when I look at our son I see you
knowing that you gave me a piece
Of you.
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Author:
adeana stobs (Pseudonym) (
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Comments6
And a beautiful son he is. Your poem is a great write too.
thank you
kinda sad,but life is
that true but we move on from it
Sad and brave ....good personal poem
I can relate to this piece very much, although I don't have a child with any of my exes (THANK GOD) but, the pain remains the same. Love is a crazy thing....thanks for your friend request btw...
your welcome
And he's a piece of YOU too wonderful lady. look at all the wonderful hours you can put into his young mind, watch him grow into the man you'll be proud - oh so proud of, and one day mother.... grandchildren..... he's very very much a part of you darling lady.
thank you, he's my everything in life
Hello, Sad and beautiful, yes and so well written, has a nice flow to it. Best regards, Eileen
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