Thoughts

Staffnotesoul11

We all want to die

But never bring our selves

To cross that line 

We are fragile beings 

A thousand and one things

To stop us from feeling

Fight or flight 

Our basic responce to 

Test to test might 

What if I don't have any left? 

What if the only thing holding me back

Starts with a cleff?

  • Author: Tavaris (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 13th, 2017 16:51
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • myself and me

    We are all dying, but do the best we can to be away from the line. Like your writing.

    • Staffnotesoul11

      Thank you. Its kind of my therapy in a way

    • burning-embers

      If it starts with a cleff it will be the concerto of the rest of your life. A piece of music uniquely yours with its most beautiful and ugly moments each telling your story. it will last you your lifetime and you will replay its parts over and over in your memories. No one else will have your memories or your experiences but..... you are a gifted poet and you can try to show us their beauty with your words.

      • Staffnotesoul11

        Woe thank you so much that means the world. I believe my heart is the beat to the music of my life and way i live it are my lyrics.

        • burning-embers

          With those words flowing from you young lady you have a wonderfully artistic life ahead.



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