Ready to ship
Cleared the mist
Packing slip
Out from my list
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Author:
Malu (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 15th, 2017 16:20
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Ready to ship
Cleared the mist
Packing slip
Out from my list
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Comments3
Four little lines, Malu, that can say so much. When the order is filled, on to the next. When the relationship is over, on to the next. When the grieving is done, out from the list!
Yes. Could be. You as a poet can interpret this way. Truly it is about my work. One more order gone. So, next.
You know Malu, this is the beauty of this site. Other poets read your stuff and come up with great ideas. I just love it when somebody finds or sees something in one of my poems I never even thought of!
You're very productive, at work and at writing poetry. You turn out a very professional product. Thanks for sharing malu.
Thank you A.P. Well, I try to. Sometimes I get lost on both subjects. Then I find my way back.
Hmmmm odd the way i relate to this as i come out of a mist malubotelho. I'm ready to ship my emotions to some not too far away recipient any time now..... oh yes.... i should be so lucky.
Wrap your emotions on gift wrapping paper prior of delivering it. She might like to receive it.
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