CSS20013

Glass Bottle

"A metaphorical bottle of life", is what I call myself.

My outer shell is smooth to the touch,

yet easy to crack or shatter.

People typically see through me and don't take me seriously.

I have a cork in my mouth keeping me from telling the truth.

I am who I am and I can't hide that,

each word that escapes your mouth cracks me a little more.

Im shattered by your lies and your ways of life,

but glass can be recycled right?

 

 

Comments6

  • Frank Prem

    Yes it can. Nice work.

  • myself and me

    you are not glass, you are crystal, beautiful and strong.

    • CSS20013

      Thank you so much! I tend to find beauty in the little things such as poems. Thank you for reading my poem and taking the time to comment something so kind!

    • CSS20013

      Thank you so much for your input and time Frank, it means a lot to me when someone takes the time to read my poems and actually likes them.

    • Nicholas Browning

      I tend to think that we're all just vessels of some sort. I've found no name to accurately describes it yet, but your take on the matter is indeed interesting. Thanks for this.

      • CSS20013

        Yes I can agree with that but thank soooo much for your input and time it means a lot!

      • FredPeyer

        CSS, another great poem! And I agree completely with 'myself and me' that you are much better than glass, that you are a rare crystal, to be treasured!

        • CSS20013

          Thank you so much! I love how everyone on the site is so sweet and supportive so thank you for being one of these people. You and other supporters are huge treasures to me!!

        • burning-embers

          Young you may be but this is incredibly good. Excellent theme and beautifully written. This is one of the best pieces i have seen on here and it goes straight into my favourites.
          Exceptional!

          • CSS20013

            Thank you so much for your support and kind words. They mean a lot and encourage me to continue my writing so once again thank you will all of my heart!!

            • burning-embers

              You deserve praise for this. Keep writing.

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