alissa

Dead love

Two in the morning;

“I miss you.”

Can’t you tell that I’m done mourning

this dead love that I’ve lost too?

 

Comments6

  • Candlewitch

    hello,
    short and to the point, coming from a logical mind frame. nice to meet you!

    *hugs, Cat

    • alissa

      thank you, it is nice to meet you as well!

    • FredPeyer

      I just love these shorties! Very well written, Alissa.
      Now I know why I always turn off the phone at night.

      • alissa

        Thank you! I wish I could do the same but then my mind wanders too much.

      • Tony36

        Well written and expressed

        • alissa

          Thank you!

          • Tony36

            Welcome

          • Simple-Man87

            Amazing. On the other end of the spectrum, their was a time I'd kill for a 2am message.
            Very well done Alissa.

            • alissa

              Thank you. I have both prayed for and dreaded those 2 a.m. texts. There comes a time when it's just not worth it anymore.

              • Simple-Man87

                I understand. There is usually always one who wants the break up and one who doesn't. You're a strong woman. Keep it up, I look forward to reading more.

              • myself and me

                The message come in at the wrong time, did not do the magic but the opposite.
                Love your short but penetrating expression.

              • private poet

                Short but noteworthy! Economic use of words but got your message out there. Xx



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