Anthony R Chancellor

The Walk

With one foot in front of the other,

Every motion is a choice,

Sometimes for good,

Love is one of those good choices.

But make a wrong turn and it could be all over,

It's hard to see at first,

Best to have that one special person,

To help you stick it through,

Once you make that wrong turn,

It's easy to turn around,

But you might find yourself alone.

Comments2

  • Nicholas Browning

    A nice fragment of a whole philosophy that I would enjoy to see more of. Keep it up.

    • Anthony R Chancellor

      Any suggestions on how to continue? Made this one back in high school years ago. Lately i write more stories then poems.

      • Nicholas Browning

        You could elaborate on how love is one of the good steps that we, as humans, take. You could also incorporate the fact that sometimes we end up alone because of our decisions.

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      • Clock King

        First 3 lines are amazing



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