Does music flow unsteady?
Does it ask to be heard?
Or does it make you stop and pay attention?
Do you want to play?
Or do you want to perform?
Make them stay,
Make them feel your uproar!
Don't let them question you,
Just make them stand!
Take the field and steal the show,
They may be there for football,
But by the end make them know,
Who owns that field,
Make them see your glow!
A true band never backs down,
True friends are those next to you,
A true march will be grand!
A true performance will make them stand!
Be proud every step of the way through,
Music never goes stale,
Make them turn and look at you!
Make them glad they came!
Make them know your name!
Make them know the form,
Make them know the storm,
Make them know you fly on land,
Make them stand!
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Author:
Raskolnikov (Pseudonym) (
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Comments2
Good write R.
Danke
I get the feeling you're in a marching band. I was in one in middle school. Never marched though. lol.
Nice write.
You might try using synonyms to spice up the style a bit! Just a suggestion.
Thank you much, kind sir. What words would you suggest using synonyms on?
Noted, thanks
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