Whether you're walking through walls or breaking down doors,
You're getting into a space prescribed as mine.
A promised space of safety and privacy.
That is no longer mine alone.
Everything I have now is yours too.
Even my space.
My safety.
My privacy.
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Author:
Alex (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 21st, 2017 17:27
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Aaaah relationships. Don'tcha just love 'em. Gone is ya freedom and privacy and u have to share the john. Aren't we humans disusting. Great writing by the way.
Thank you again!! Even though they suck in reality, atleast relationships make good inspiration!
Another great poem!
What you say is true, but you are now also in the other person's space. The question is whether or not you are giving up more than you gain.
I never even considered looking at it that way!! Thank you for the new perspective. Makes me think maybe there should be more to this poem!
Tell you the truth, I never looked at a relationship from this point of view either. Interesting! Don't add to this one, but maybe this could be the germ for a new one. How do we affect the other person, how does that person affect us. Who is getting more out of it? You are the writer, a-pott, you figure it out!
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