Invisible Scars

Dark Spirits

All they do is haunt me 

They can always see 

It doesn't matter what i do 

I know that my dark thoughts are true 

Its not that i don't love 

I just can't seem to rise above 

The dark thoughts have always brought me down 

But the dark spirits, they make no sound 

They quietly suffocate me 

Soon sadness will be the only emotion i can see 

Comments2

  • Candlewitch

    hello Invisible scars,

    a fine poem outlining darkness and depression! I felt like this, too. So I gave this feeling an identity...he is eddy styx and he writes most of my poems of darkness :)

    *hugs, Cat
    ever, eddy

  • burning-embers

    Dark writing from your brave soul. Thought provoking stuff.



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