Diamond

Cast Away

Cast Away

 

A turbulent sail on a stormy sea

In a humble vessel of my innocence

Searching for shores of soulfulness and love

With a deep knowing of its presence

But no compass to navigate

Drifting without an aim, in the blows of wind.

 

Battling the fear of condemnation

For being true to my inner being

Feeding beasts of selfishness and anger

Hit by waves and torrents of rain

Holding on to my intrinsic desire

With a hope to find the island of dreams

 

Wandering across the vastness of the brine

With oars meek to endure the storm

Letting go off the struggle to row

I curl inward to rest my heart

And see I reach calmer waters

Only to find no shore in the sight

 

Complacent with my exploration

And adventures in the deep ocean

I leave my desires and dreams

And let the paddle float away.

 

08-27-17

Comments14

  • orchidee

    A good write D.

    • Diamond

      Appreciate O!

    • Goldfinch60

      Good write. May you journey bring you to joy and love.

      • Diamond

        Thank you for the read Goldfinch.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks DIAMOND ~ for another beautiful and haunting Poem ~ straight from your ever searching and beautiful Heart. Metaphorically we are all ships adrift on the Sea of Life & Love. We have sails ~ engines ~ oars to power us and rudders and compasses to guide us ~ BUT (as you say) it i only when we "Let our PADDLE float away" that we can be truly free ! Thanks for caring &sharing ~ LOVED IT ! Oceanic Hugs ~ BRIAN ! Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B.

        • Diamond

          A nice interpretation Brian. Thank you for reading and commenting.

        • OUTBACK

          WELL* - IF I FIND THAT PADDLE* FLOATING AROUND* - SOMEWHERE - I'M GONNA PICK IT UP & MAKE USE OF IT - FOR SHORE* !

          • Diamond

            ha ha....I like the twists in your words....truly!

          • Louis Gibbs

            A beautifully expressed metaphor of letting go of dreams and aspirations, accepting the 'less' of conformity. Brilliant, Diamond!

            • Diamond

              Thank you Louis....acceptance = joy
              I am glad you liked it.

            • malubotelho

              This is so awesome beautiful Diamond. It speaks to me in a sad soft way. Like a breeze in a cold day. I love your way of writing and I identify with it. I like the movie also. Very much.

              • Diamond

                A poem there dear friend. Thank you malu.....

                It speaks to me in a sad soft way.
                Like a breeze in a cold day.
                I love your way of writing

                I guess my mind is just too afflicted..lol!

              • lost-but-not-broken17

                This was so good! And opened my eyes to a couple of inner things! Great write(:

                • Diamond

                  I appreciate your reading and commenting. I am glad it inspired you in some way.

                • WL Schuett

                  Beautiful Diamond lovely writing

                  • Diamond

                    Thank you my friend...Much love!

                  • rrodriguez

                    Don't let the paddle float away. Keep on fighting just like this beautiful poem express in the beginning. Great write Diamond enjoyed very much.

                    • Diamond

                      Hello Roberto. Living and fighting are on opposite ends of the stick my friend. I appreciate your reading and I am really glad you enjoyed it. : )

                    • dusk arising

                      That paddle will find its way back into your grasp the next time you lay your poetic mind to peace upon the pillow of your dreams. Wonderous journey your writing takes us on here.

                      • Diamond

                        Wonders happen in the equation of your reading and my writing dusk. Appreciate your visit.

                      • myself and me

                        "I leave my desires and dreams

                        And let the paddle float away."

                        The wave will take you to your dream shore.
                        Love this one.

                        • Diamond

                          Thank you for your kind words m&m...Glad you loved it.

                        • Poetic Dan

                          Ahoy!

                        • whisperingquill

                          Awesome

                          • Diamond

                            Eerie..!!!!
                            Complacent, drift, fear....lol

                          • Suresh

                            There're a whole load of us who live your journey
                            Hoping for dreams to materialize, before we lay down on a gurney

                            I hope you don't mind me taking a journey back



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