My hypothetical felo-de-se.
The epistle that accompanies it.
Nothing gets me more than the pain I ache for.
The anguish that elates me so.
I yearn not for my unhappiness,
but for the guilt it will burry deep into the chassis of your being.
and to say I'm cruel for such criminal needs?
I challenge you to wonder why.
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Alex (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Reflection
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'...it will burry deep into the chassis of your being'
I am challenged to wonder how come you write so well at such a young age!
Well I guess I am like that old dog who can still learn some tricks 🙂
Made my day once again Fred, I'm flattered you think so highly of my poems! I hope to continue hearing from you! And I will be sure to check out those "new tricks" on your profile now!
Too many published to read them all! Some are good, some not. Sometimes I feel like that blind chicken. If you try long enough, eventually you will find some food! :-), or in our case, write something good. It doesn\'t matter, just write, as much as you possibly can. And something else I read somewhere once: There is no such thing as good writing, there is only good re-writing!
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