Will she be out to fly my kite
Or blow my hair up to a frightening height
Will she make my sails flap
Or gust up my cap
Will she slam the door shut tight
Or breeze through the night
Gale I will name her,
She comes in the coolest of drafts or sometimes a whirlwind of anger.
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Author:
Shij (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A poem is for anyones own interpretation really. That's the beauty of a poem. For me, it's obvious in my poem that I was trying to personify the wind by giving it human qualities by referring to the wind as " she " and also by naming her " gale" in the end ( as in gale force winds). Obviously I also used words such as " draft", "gust" etc... words already associated with describing wind. The main reason I used personification was just to make if more personal that's all. I'm new to all this so forgive me for my mistakes. Thank you.
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Great write
Thank you 😊
Welcome
Hello Shij - - welcome to M.P.S. This is a friendly poetry site and has plenty of postings to read and review and perhaps learn from - - there are many styles and diverse subjects to suit every taste. Your poem on Wind attracted my initial attention with its inventive words of personification which gave a freshness to each lively line. Hoping to read more of your work soon and meanwhile keep the poetic ink flowing my friend.
Hello Fay.
Thank you so very much for such a warm welcome. This website seems very much full of friendly and very talented people so I definitely have so much to learn! My only criticism is I don’t come on here enough but I will try to more often and I will most definitely try to draw creative ink from the fellow users from this site! I’ve so much on here to learn from and I’m definitely inspired by the work on here! I shall look forward to viewing your work, I’ve no doubt I will be inspired after reading your wonderful profile!
Thank you for your kind words about my poem. It is very much appreciated 😊
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