3:AM and I'm thinking:
should I kill myself,
or should I wait for the world to kill me first?
The moon is like a water lily floating against the dark night.
It makes me wonder.
Am I a monster for doing the things that I do,
or am I a saint for regretting them?
4AM and I'm thinking:
that the stars are kind for bringing me some peace.
But still, it makes me wonder.
How I am going to keep breathing,
when I know how easy it is
to drift into nothingness
like the memory of a bad dream.
5:AM and I'm thinking:
that even the honeyed blade of dawn,
can't save me now.
Even the cool promise of a new day,
and the warm beat of my own memories,
makes me wonder,
if I'll still be alive by the cold light of-.
6AM.
I don't want to think anymore.
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Author:
alienkid (
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- Comment from author about the poem: i write when i\\\'m sad :)))
- Category: Sad
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Writing offers the prospect of someone reading you, and also the chance to do it again.
It seems the better option to me, but regardless, I wish you the best.
Welcome to MPS! I hope you found writing to be cathartic and I also hope you'll write more for us to see. I think you did a great job. Thank you for sharing!
Thank you! Writing is really therapeutic for me so I appreciate it a lot. 🙂
hOne of a poets noblest companions is his/her troubled mind. You've shown yours in well written verse. lets see ore of it please, and please comment on some of other peoples writing on here - thats how it works - ppl commenting on each others work - if you dont do that you won't get many people commenting on yours it seems.
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it, I'm going to try to be more active on this site as I really enjoy other people's poetry 🙂
I fnd it very rewarding and often an inspiration to write is generated for me when i start to make a comment..... my comment becomes my next poem (then i have to compose a new comment).
hOne of a poets noblest companions is his/her troubled mind. You've shown yours in well written verse. lets see ore of it please, and please comment on some of other peoples writing on here - thats how it works - ppl commenting on each others work - if you dont do that you won't get many people commenting on yours it seems.
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