Eros Eros
You've left me starving
Parched and yearning
You black hearted beast
You meant it too
I bet you're hard in your seat
My unrest, your pleasure
My undoing, your game
I curse thee Eros!
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Author:
BlueDays (
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Cool poem , I feel for you, hope he shoots an arrow for you soon ...
Thanks WL.
Gosh, there are worse things!
I imagined Eros and Cupid sitting next to each other having a good old laugh when i wrote this which made me laugh too! Naughty Eros.
Good to hear lol
Haha, I love this! Straight to the point, yet each time I read it I see it from a different angle
Hey TN96, thank you for your lovely feedback! I'd love to hear about the different angles you found?
Very nice write, BlueDays! Unusual and imaginative angle, I do like it!
Interesting writing. Well done. Never read anything similar before.
I'm really chuffed with these comments, thank you everyone I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Eros the black hearted beast ....thats a first! Don't get too hungry for love or you might begin to be frightenng. Anyway, a great piece of writing! Please comment on my stuff.
Thank you dusk arising, it was of course not meant literally.
I will be sure to read more of your poems and leave feedback 😊
Sure thing BlueDays, although I guessed it was mythology related, It didn't click for me at first that Eros was the Greek god of sexual attraction. So I sort of read it as if he were a tyrannical, omnipotent god getting off on messing with people's lives. Which I guess is somewhat true in the poem, but it took me a few reads to realise what it really meant 😉 haha
Loved the naughtiness hinted at in this 😊
Hehe me too!!
Loved!!!!
Awesome, Thank you 😊
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