Shine

Me And You

You Said Leave Me Be

This Pain I Can Not Believe

Locked Away... No Key

Comments4

  • LAWLESS

    I found out recently that haikus usually don't have titles. This one is heartfelt regardless of that. Well done!

    • Shine

      Thank you for teaching me that, James. Thank you for your comment.

    • myself and me

      I know that kind of pain. I was killed by the pain, now I was reborn and much stronger.
      Nice writing.

      • Shine

        Thank you M&M. Sometimes I feel as though I am hanging from a cliff trying to find a way to cope with everything.

        • myself and me

          When you are hanging from a cliff, the first thing and the only thing you should do is climbing up and be away from the cliff, then deal with whatever you need to.

        • Accidental Poet

          If love is meant to be, it will be. If not, then it will let you know. Listen to your heart, it knows the truth. One day soon you will shine for real. ; )

          • Santita

            Wise words from AP!

            • Shine

              Thanks AP. Are you my HP? lol

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            • Santita

              I like this part 2, looking forward to part 3! Sorry for your pain, my friend. Writing always helps me through it, Shine. See my piece "the clown and the contortionist", a piece of my story. Nicely done.

              • Shine

                I will look for your story, Santita. I am looking forward to it.



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