Sail far, in the sky,
Wave farewell, yearning to find -
Meaning, within life.
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Author:
Nicholas Browning (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Hello all, here again with a short piece. I hope all of you are doing fine on this wonderful day. "It's sunny for once." I hope you enjoy the short work, and I'll see you all again soon.
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Lovely Senryu Nicholas - I love the message that peace comes when we find life's meaning.
One of many ways to see it, haha. Thank you very much Fay.
Ohh a miracle! Sailing in the sky. I looked up and saw ya go by in ya boat! Erm, farewell then. Where ya going?! heehee. And furthermore - Well, it was sunny in my part of the UK - for a while!
Sunny days and starry nights are the best. Good to hear it bud. The boat ride symbolizes heading out on your journey, or getting on that good ole roller coaster haha.
Great poem, made me think. Then realized you are talking about an inside journey where we can fly the water, sail the sky, or swim the mountains, all to find that elusive meaning.
Indeed my friend. Thank you very much!
Stupendous!
Take a bow! "Bows".
Haha, thank you.
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