Where am I expanding too
What is it I see
Do I need to drift closer
Is there something to tell me
Words just keep on flowing
Drifting through and through
Open doors are in my room
Never to be shut again
For I feel there is more
I'm just yet to see
As all these thoughts
Are a mystery
Ready to explore
I thank all out there
That my words may hit apon
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: When I have a moment of my emotional anxiety, it breaks me down but I write and think so much that I turn it around. This was my last one of a evening, eyes puffed out, head is spinning took one more drag and these words hit me. I think there from all of you!
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Your words have hit me Dan and the image is carefully chosen to mold into the thought that doors can open when we anticipate they can. Thanks for sharing this.
Thank you dearly for the same.
Dan, the poetic man, well done sir.
The quote was a lovely touch.
Glad to have my brain infected by all I interact with!
Thank you for gifting us these beautiful pieces! Sometimes the most exciting parts of life are those filled with the unknown, delve in for you don't know what opportunities lie in plain sight! Again, wonderful write Dan!
Thank you for helping me understand my mind is actually a wonderful place. Your words are truly appreciated my friend
Wonderful poem, beautiful picture and a thought-provoking quote.
Thank you
Dan this is great. I know you are searching for a greater truth that will satisfy you and possibly all mankind. i hope you achieve your personal goal of awareness. Everything which i have seen along my journey seems to ask for a great deal of inner reflection and taking time to digest/evaluate. No easy answers but certain paths lead to fresh awareness. keep going, as will i. Good to read!
We shall carry on carrying on good sir until that inner light we see. Thank you for the deep reply
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