"Untitled"

MaddieJ

I am a savage in your clean world

unenlightened to the polished, plasticity.

My boat floats freely down aberrant streams 

you sail straight through familiar seas.

I feel alive among the dead.

Do I cross over the other side just to know you?

I couldn't bare losing my life just to understand your death.

 

 

 

  • Author: Leya Virago (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 10th, 2017 23:20
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a scramble.... Enjoy!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 18
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Comments2

  • Seek

    Sentiments of a fiercely independent soul so well articulated.

    • MaddieJ

      Thanks so much!

    • WL Schuett

      Very lyrical I love poetry that just sounds good , I'm not sure what it means but I don't care ... well done Leya

      • MaddieJ

        Thanks Bill! I was going for a more abstract way to express the thought and leave it open for interpretation. Glad you enjoyed it.



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