You found me in the dark when there was nowhere else to hide.
But you took away all that hate, and made me feel ok inside.
You never cared about the times I've failed,
You cared about the times i tried.
You set aside my ten thousand mistakes and made it feel like zero.
That's part of the reason why you're my hero.
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Author:
Liberty Howard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 11th, 2017 20:14
- Comment from author about the poem: I dedicate this poem to my boyfriend, and my best friend Sam.
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Comments3
Great write, excellent flow and a beautiful sentiment.
Mugsdaddy
Nice end rhyme and dominant heptameter in this sweet sestet. The prophetic meaning in your poem very beautifully conveys the message of God's unique and total love for each one of us and so this poem in particular, resonates spiritually and very highly with me this evening. Thank you.
Nice work, a lot lighter than my first read of yours 😉 love it
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