Lawless

My Friend Jesus



God created all.

His son won't let us fall.

Heaven is where the good go.

Don't you all know?

Hell is a place for the bad.

Isn't it really sad?

All I know is that Jesus is my friend.

He will be my friend past the end!

Comments8

  • OUTBACK

    WELL ? THERE IS NO* END TO LIFE* nor BEGINNING* TO IT ! !THERE IS NOTHING* - THAT IS BEYOND* THAT* WHICH IS ( LIFE )* ! ( LIFE & DEATH )* = WHEN CONCEPTUALLY* - PERCEIVED* AS SEPARATE* & EXCLUSIVE* - STATES* OF EXISTENCE* = ( IS* HELL) ! BAD* - SAD* - MAD* = ? = ALL A PART OF LIFE* AS IT SO IS* - NOT AS WE PRETEND* IT - ( SHOULD)* BE* !

    • Lawless

      Just having fun man. Stop thinking so hard, you cheeky monkey, dear Mr. O.

      • OUTBACK

        I\'M JUST = ( HEAR )* = AS OPPOSED* TO = ELSEWHERE ! WOOF !

      • 2 more comments

      • orchidee

        A fine write J.

      • Candlewitch

        dear James Michael,

        Jesus had some great teaching stories in the christian bible. but that is not the reality that I live and will die. we all have our own path to walk. may yours be blessed. well do I remember the song of Norman's :) do you also remember the song "Sky Pilot"?

        *hugs, Cat

        • Lawless

          Thanks Cat! I vaguely remember the song "Sky Pilot", that was many moons ago. I will look it up immediately.

          • Lawless

            Yes, that's an awesome song. I love the ending with the orchestra.
            I'm more of a space traveler than a sky pilot. Excuse me whilst I go there!

          • 2 more comments

          • FredPeyer

            Have to say, James, your inner child writes pretty well!

            • Lawless

              Thanks Freddy, he comes out to play occasionally!

            • Lawless

              Hey my dark brother,

              You're my brother from another mother. I've got to do my thing due to the event that changed my life. I might pull a dark one out of my ass, don't count on it though. Sorry!

              Lawless

            • myself and me

              "Hell is a place for the bad."
              I guess Hell is too crowded now.

              • Lawless

                Thanks the two of you.
                Actually I no longer believe in the concept of heaven and hell. I believe it is one, similar to the concept of Yin and Yang. My poetry a lot of times reflects this.

                I could go on and on, forgive my self indulgence.
                Thanks again for dropping by.

              • drchito fl

                It is great to see a religious poem!

                drchito fl

                • Lawless

                  Thank you! There are a few here who write such things. Orchidee being the best, his hymns are spectacular.
                  Myself, I do not stick to one religion, I study them all. I am a Christian but I do love Buddha's teachings.
                  Welcome aboard, this is a very friendly site.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Good write from your inner child's mind. Even if people do not believe to live like Jesus did would not be a bad thing and maybe the world would be saved.

                  Don't worry about going to hell, it is too full of politicians.



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