Big brothers give the best hugs
Comforting arms of stability
That bring feelings of tranquility
To be able to rest in calmness
To be able to find solace
Warm oranges and bright yellow
Feelings that make me feel mellow
How I long to be calm
Like a little girl lost, looking for mom
I get such a shrinking feeling
Like a roof with no ceiling
I just want to be in the arms of a brother
Because that kind of comfort can come from no other
I just miss my brother
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Author:
Daisyy (
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- Category: Family
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Comments4
A special relationship to be sure. I am a big brother so I don't know it from your perspective but love your description.
Emotional, gripping, but... oh so true. My brother had saved my life more times than I can count, and I took him for granted. You shared an heart rattling write today, thank you. I loved it.
Been a big brother for 68 years and my 'little' sister still expects me to call her every week. And I do!
Hugs are more difficult, she lives in Europe.
Great poem with a great message!
I am close with my brother, this brought back a lot to the past, thank you for this splendid poem, well done.
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