the bridge collapsed because the supports gave out
the weight was too much
the supports couldn't hold anymore
the bridge fell into the deep darkness
with the memories of the hopeful times
the times when the supports were strong
and the bridge was just fine
but the sorrow
the pain
the hurt
was too much weigh
And the bridge collapsed
taking me with it
The bridge
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Author:
sinisterdragon321 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The supports are people who have given up on the world and they hold up the bridge but, when the bridge got too heavy with mean hurtful words and thoughts it collapsed.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
This was a great write,
You're not alone in the darkness though. My bridge collapsed about a year ago, and I'm still drowning.
I loved this poem. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you and I hope someone will throw you a life jacket
Thank you....
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