When you breathe I live
When you cry I die
Cuz we both have one soul
But two different bodies.
- tanvir
- Author: tanvir H (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: September 13th, 2017 16:13
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 42
When you breathe I live
When you cry I die
Cuz we both have one soul
But two different bodies.
- tanvir
Comments4
Rancor, agree with James, otherwise a great poem!
thank you sir
Sorry about that 'rancor'. Spell check changed it from tanvir and I did not see it.
its fine you can call me rancor
Nice writing Tanvir. A cute short one.
thank you ma'am
Nicely done!
thank you sir
i really liked this message,two bodies,one soul
thank you sir
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