we have one soul

tanvir H

 

When you breathe I live

        When you cry I die

Cuz we both have one soul

But two different bodies.

 

- tanvir

 

 

 

  • Author: tanvir H (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 13th, 2017 16:13
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • FredPeyer

    Rancor, agree with James, otherwise a great poem!

    • tanvir H

      thank you sir

      • FredPeyer

        Sorry about that 'rancor'. Spell check changed it from tanvir and I did not see it.

        • 1 more comment

      • malubotelho

        Nice writing Tanvir. A cute short one.

        • tanvir H

          thank you ma'am

        • rrodriguez

          Nicely done!

          • tanvir H

            thank you sir

          • ron parrish aka wordman

            i really liked this message,two bodies,one soul

            • tanvir H

              thank you sir



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