I've been trying to think of something to write,
To make you feel my love,
But I just wanna hold you tonight,
And watch the stars above,
My life is a story unwritten,
You could fill half the book,
If life were a bottomless pit,
You could fill it with just one look,
Love is not a temperamental fit,
It may seem like my mind is gone,
But I swear for you it's worth losing it,
You always worry about living up to others,
But you're perfect,
Your identity please don't cover,
You're beautiful, sweet, and kind,
For me there can be no other,
Your presence is the most addictive drug,
Will you be my love to hug?
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Author:
Raskolnikov (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 14th, 2017 09:06
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Comments3
Well written and expressed
Thank you
Welcome
Judging from your well written poem, she must be one heck of a great woman!
Thank you, and yes, she is.
When a woman inspires a man to write poetry for her, she is something very special. ; )
Thank you, she is very special.
I could tell by your great poem about her. ; )
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