What a gift you give to me
That you give free, so easily
And seem so pleased with how i appease your needs
You fill me full of me
Indeed im on cloud nine, im free
How it feels to be encased in thee
Such ecstasy's destiny is electricity
A kind that sparks so recklessly the fires that warm me mentally
And cast shadows complimentary to scenes that lull me gently
Sensitively, genuinely
But never apprehensively
With empathy I enter thee
A mindframe from where you may see
That shows me all we're meant to be
And all I see from you to me;
A lure for opportunity
Beneath the surface, all I lack,
I see what you're holding back
It's surfaced, stacked upon my back
I'm jacked up so much might collapse
Your purpose giving me this gift
Is passing baggage I can't lift
You've cracked, I bandage all your slits
And missed the gist of your entrapping, clamping
Stamped and taped-shut packing,
A gift I never really wanted,
Only cared about the wrapping
Enribboned wrists no longer lift
Ensnared within your guilt trip grappling
In your hands, to me you're clasping
On and all I see is falling, hardly much from me, but always
Falling; all I see of thee
Beneath my solid ground you plunge
And try to clutch to all you see
And while you're hanging on to me
We're falling
Falling, you and me
- Author: b-LAH-que ( Offline)
- Published: September 15th, 2017 00:43
- Comment from author about the poem: On an unfit relationship, from my experience and perspective.
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments1
Lovely poem. I like the rhyming. And the length. Good length. No to long. Not to short. Keep up the good writes. ❤ 💗 💕 😊
Thanks! I genuinely appreciate knowing my poems can be so admired... Especially the rhyming. I feel like a lot of poetry fans don't care for the rhyme schemes, but I have way too much fun writing them!
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