Two petals fell from life's great tree

and floated down through destiny

a subtle breeze pushed them apart

where the unlikely pair could have no start

but as God looked down and watched them drift

he raised his hand to give them lift

he wove a path for them to ride

until one day they were side by side

together they rode the current that God had spun

and the two drew closer until they were One

  • Author: arazimus (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 16th, 2017 03:17
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 28
  • User favorite of this poem: Isabella.
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  • Noah

    What a lovely depiction of two souls making their own way, only to find each other one day. I hope that's right at least lol

  • arazimus

    Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, it means the world to me and yes that's my wife and I, 25 years strong now

  • Chloe Rachel Flisher

    Beautiful! It is so deep yet so delicate, keep up the work!

    CR x

    • arazimus

      Thank you so much Chloe

    • dusk arising

      Aaaah that god-spun draft wafting through our lifes. Your words bring to mind the wonder of destiny.... is it all worked out beforehand and we just innocently float along upon our destined route? Look what youve started! Please comment on my stuff.

      • arazimus

        Thank you so much, for reading and commenting I've been writing for many years and to shy to put it out there, comments like this make me glad I did thanks again

        • dusk arising

          Hey, dont be shy to write anything on here friend. You will find ppl here very supportive and the more you comment on others writing then the more will comment on yours. This place has really freed me up from tentative beginnings..... just keep writing and showing us

        • Isabella

          LOVE LOVE LOVE it.

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