Two petals fell from life's great tree
and floated down through destiny
a subtle breeze pushed them apart
where the unlikely pair could have no start
but as God looked down and watched them drift
he raised his hand to give them lift
he wove a path for them to ride
until one day they were side by side
together they rode the current that God had spun
and the two drew closer until they were One
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What a lovely depiction of two souls making their own way, only to find each other one day. I hope that's right at least lol
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, it means the world to me and yes that's my wife and I, 25 years strong now
Beautiful! It is so deep yet so delicate, keep up the work!
CR x
Thank you so much Chloe
Aaaah that god-spun draft wafting through our lifes. Your words bring to mind the wonder of destiny.... is it all worked out beforehand and we just innocently float along upon our destined route? Look what youve started! Please comment on my stuff.
Thank you so much, for reading and commenting I've been writing for many years and to shy to put it out there, comments like this make me glad I did thanks again
Hey, dont be shy to write anything on here friend. You will find ppl here very supportive and the more you comment on others writing then the more will comment on yours. This place has really freed me up from tentative beginnings..... just keep writing and showing us
LOVE LOVE LOVE it.
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